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Service: First Draft Pack
An intensive program for beginners on a budget.
description:
An initial Story Diagnosis provides the required intelligence to start outlining with a vision. Two subsequent Step Outline sessions allow to rework the story in areas where it is flawed. The result will be a structure that can serve as the basis for a much healthier next draft.
objectives:
- to establish the main and supporting character arcs.
- to find the story’s major turning points.
- to analyse existing plot points, cut dead scenes and create new ones.
- to identify sequences, tighten and tweak the dramatic flow.
turnaround(*):
- first session: two working days from receipt of materials and payment.
- full service must be taken within eight weeks.
payment:
- 50% on order, with submission of (first) materials.
- balance prior to commencement of the (last) consultation.
- methods accepted: PayPal, Direct Transfer, Bank Cheque, Credit Card(**)
- part-refunded if in conjunction with an other service (within one month).
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(*) Estimated, based on past experience.
(**) Processing fee may apply.









Ben Racicot from Massachusetts, United States
Mike Jones from South Australia, Australia